for this piece I think what happened is your gesture lines here they're going this way so I think you just missed the Tilt like his gesture lines like it's it's tilting up here and then down here so you kind of have to find this line here right and then to the left of this line they're tilting up and then to the right of this line they're tilting down let's see if we can if we can move this eye down I think the individual parts that you drew were all really good uh probably just needs a little bit of tilting right so let's let's tilt his mouth a little bit you know really good job on the hair really really nice Line work on the hair so his jaw uh looks a little bit too wide I would bring his ear in and then his jaw would be like here the other thing you could consider doing is just like moving the entire face down because there's just not enough room for his forehead